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雅思从5.5到7!南崎学员EASON的三个月的华丽蜕变

发表时间:2017-07-17 11:54   1744

第一次见到EASON,大约是在四月,和其他学员不一样,EASON问题很少,电话里简单聊了两句,第二天他就拍板要来菲律宾学12周英语,而且决定尽快出发。我们问EASON怎么那么快做决定,要不要再听听介绍,他就说了一句话:相信你们。

31岁的EASON是纯粹的理工男,在上海的知名企业工作,话不多,但是眼光锐利,看问题脉络清晰,他虽然不是语言专业出身,却在日常工作中自己摸索,日语娴熟,入学就有英语5.5的基础。由此可见,语言学习根本不需要门槛,只要你想学,愿意学,任何地方任何时间都可以学。

到了学校之后,EASON进步神速,仅仅8周时间他已经在模拟考试连续进步,除了speaking仍然在6.5,其他三科全部上7。每个周末,其他同学在外边逛街,他却仍然在学校埋头苦学。

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由于学习成绩优秀,EASON的作文被学校当作优秀范文展示在官方网站,这也是今年首次中国学员作文被摘选,作为推荐EASON的中国中介,南崎也感到万分自豪。

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下面我们公开一篇EASON的writing例文。

MONOL的评分标准为,每次模拟考试,学生的作文要经过三个老师审核,取平均分。

写作题目:

Nowadays, children play less with one another and this has an impact on their development. What are the reasons for this? Does it have a good or a bad effect on children?

You should write at least 250 words.

(南崎注,中文翻译:当前,和伙伴玩的孩子在减少,这对孩子的成长有一定影响,这是什么原因,请阐述会对孩子有好还是坏的影响)

Nowadays, the industrialised society is changing our way of life, children, who are considered to be glad to play with others, tend to stay at home and play alone. From my own perspective, this phenomenon is caused by a variety of reasons and definitely it is harmful to their health.

To begin with, it is an undeniable fact that it is the modern life style which makes youngsters to be isolated. Compared to the situation in the past that people live in a community and they are familiar with each other, people lost the close relationships with their neighbours. Naturally, it is difficult to find partners to play with, thus, young people are forced to play by themselves instead of playing with others.

In addition, the development of technology enables more and more indoor games, which can easily catch young generation's attention, and they prefer to play these games at home rather than outside. Although some games, such as online video games also provide them an opportunity to communicate with other players, obviously it cannot replace the effect by playing with friends physically.

Admittedly, this circumstance has negative effects towards young people.

Firstly, the lack of communication and cooperation can possibly make children less sociable. In that case, they might lose the ability to talk with others face- to-face, which is regarded as an essencial skill in their future life. Aside from that, cooperation skills, which is important in education and work, are still impossible to appeare in their life.

To sum up, it is the modern life style and technology that make the young generation less sociable, and it harms to both children's physical and mental health.

同学们觉得如何,这就是一篇标准的7分写作范文。你们能写的出来么?

菲律宾游学给了大家最好的学习环境,剩下的靠同学们能跟上教师的节奏一步一个脚印。还有最后4周EASON就要毕业参加最后考试了,我们相信他能取得自己满意的成绩,让我们拭目以待。也欢迎即将来碧瑶学习的学员向前辈求知取得建议。


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